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Jack landed softly on the snow-covered ground.  He had been flying around exploring the world when he had spotted something in the mountains.
A girl was walking lonely in the darkness with a red cape dragging behind her.  Jack felt like something was pulling him toward her. He knew she could not see so he decided to follow her for a bit. She was walking slowly with the wind against her slowly climbing up the mountain.
There was something about her; it looked like she was broken as if she had lost everything.
Suddenly she started to sing, her clear voice filled the cold empty air.
Jack felt like someone just had hit him in the stomach. The song was full with sadness, he wanted to put his arms around her hold her and comfort her.  
But just as it sounded like the girl was going to break down she raised her voice and the song got a different tone.
She threw up her glove and ice sparkle from her hands.  Jack took a deep breath; she had the same power as him.  He watched the girl starting to play with her power. Her song had changed from sadness to a melody of freedom.  The girl’s movements enchanted him. She released her cape and let it fly away in the cold wind.
She now walked with strong steps and her song got stronger.  Like a kid seeing snow for the first time she played around happy.  
To Jack’s awe she created a stair of snow from a cliff.  She placed her foot on it carefully but when she saw that it held she smiled big and ran happily up. The stair grew before her and moved up. Jack flew after her on the wind, he watched her amazed. He no longer felt that sad feeling in his stomach; it had been replaced by something else.
When she reached the other cliff she stomped in the ground and sang high.  Jack took a step back it, the girl emitted a power full aura and the broken girl who had lost everything was gone.
his heart felt strange, he put his hand on his chest. It was beating faster and faster but why.
In front of him the girl created a castle of ice. It was sparkling and breath-taking just like her. He saw her throw away the crown and change into a beautiful new dress. She let lose her braid she walked with confident steps.
Jack was amazed, the girl had transformed in front of his eyes.  The broken sad girl was no more; this strong beautiful woman had replaced her.  She stopped singing but her voice still echoed in his head. It felt like the air had totally escaped him.  Never in his life have he wished to be visible as much as that moment. To be able to touch.  He wished with his whole heart that she would believe in him.  The girl turned around and her eyes widened.
“ Who are you?”  She asked.


gaaaaah i cant believe i fell so hard for them !! today i just watched the rise of guardians and i loved it. and i SOO WANT TO SEE FROZEN !!  but it comes to my country first at January 31 Q_Q  so i have no idea what is happening what the story and background of frozen is. all i know is that its based or well gets inspiration from one of my favorite HC andersen's stories ( the snow queen) AND that i love jack and elsa as a couple , they would probably be that couple that is always teasing each other and fighting and stuff but in the end would give up their life for each other.... in short never a calm moment i guess XD !!! soooo i wrote something weird....

i must say i just love the clip where she sings let it go and the transformation that happens in it.
and like other ppl i think that pitch had a finger in the game so if i continue to write he might plop in...... would be kind of fun if he became a love rival to jack XD. and no i dont think he vanished i mean no one believe in jack but he still had his power and all so what says pitch would not be able to survive ?..... would be kind of interesting if elsa was pitch last light ...... but now with jack in the picture it was flickering ... gaaaaah stop head!! stop thinking !! 

( i will post it on my tumblr too X'D )

.. i'm not sure if i will write anymore ... perhaps perhaps not 


AAAND i dont own jack or elsa XD 
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KitsuneGirl07 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015  New member
Wow, he fell in love just in part 1 that was fast.
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RainThatFallsAtNight Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student Writer
I wish the movie was about them!
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YTSC Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yes i also want a movie with them in it *O* just think about all the epic things they could do together!
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RainThatFallsAtNight Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student Writer
It would be so awesome! I wanna see it! ... and a movie about Hiccup and Merida.
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YTSC Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Q_Q so many dreams .... i hope some get to come true X'D 
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sjupiter88 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
Where's the rest!!! I want to hear what else happens with them!! That was awesome!
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YTSC Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
only the stars knows !!! and well the link to chapter 8 too XD 
and thansk <3 <3 
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:iconmoarplz: I love it keep this up plz?
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YTSC Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks QuQ
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You're welcome
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FunSmilies Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013

How interesting, in fact I was just listening to the song while reading this...

I like it =D

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YTSC Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
when i was writing this chapter i was listening to the song again and again and again and again etc XD 
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FunSmilies Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013

Oh, wow...

That what I have been doing for the past week, listening to this song >.<

It has become one of my favorites, I just love Disney songs =D

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YTSC Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah that song is just amazing *O*
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0ceania Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh god i love this~Llama Emoji-46 (This and That) 
i'm actually listening to the song now xD
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GlowKit Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Writer
you. must. continue.....PLZ!!!!!! its so beautiful!!! :'D
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YTSC Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
LOOK and i wrote a ch 2 today all randomly haha
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GlowKit Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Student Writer
:iconsuperw00tplz:
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YTSC Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awwww !! THANKS !! and i want to but i kind of want to see the movie frozen first to get a better grip over elsas personality so i dont ruin anything for someone X'D but but Q_Q the movie will get to my country year 2014 31 january XD  so not sure if i can wait that long
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GlowKit Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Student Writer
awwww WHAT!?!? why can't it come out sooner!!! DX just a heads up for the movie though, there will be a hell of a lot of plot twists so what you think will happen probably won't so basically EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED!!!!!....................especially the villain you will be surprised by who the villain is in this movie just thought i'd let you knw................oh yeah and be prepared for the feels!!!:iconfeelsplz:
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YTSC Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
IKR I WAS LIKE WHUT DA FUU SWEDEN Eren4  !!!!! and yeah x'D i think i know a bit of what is going to happen Akihito Kanbara (Panic) [V1]  ppl like to post spoilers and i somehow never learns to NOT WATCH THE COMMENTS ON A VID I HAVE YET TO SEE :crazy: 
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GlowKit Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Student Writer
o mer gerd!!! I do that to and then the next thing you know you pretty much exactly what's going to happen in the movie and you go to watch it in the theaters and you're just sitting there like :iconffffuuuuplz:
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YTSC Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah X'D 
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BlueProwl Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
marvelously done with this story! I like it.
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YTSC Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
THANKS !!!! QuQ  <3 <3 
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